definite improvement in tone, notes all sound in tune, high notes are acceptable – nothing badly out of tune.
The tune sounds to have a sort of swing feel, so with the sound of the groups of 2 notes (pairs of 2 notes) – sort of dat-da dat-da dat-da dat-da – good emphasis on tonguing the dat’s ! just my oppinion – but the melody sounds great.
I’ll have a look at the music, and probably take it all back what i said! just going by what i heard.
There is a slight tremor in your sound – but i wouldn’t worry about that, i have days when i have an uncontrollable tremor – even in sax lessons.
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